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TGB || Aftermath

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    Pain.


    Intense, hot, burning pain, like nothing she'd ever experienced before shot through her veins, made her body stiffen with pure agony. Half between consciousness and sleep the young Orange Fire felt herself tossing, turning, desperate to escape the furious pain that seemed to loom over her like a dark cloud waiting to strike her with sizzling electricity, though with each movement it intensified. There was no escaping it. Her dreams - no, nightmares, so influenced she was by the physical trauma she had been dealt, were wrought with fighting, yowling, fear, blood. Everthing was hazy, dark, filled with an overwhelming sense of danger. And always they ended in fire, brilliant, crackling flames surrounding her like a secure, safe cocoon, shielding her from the darkness that threatened to take her over, drown her. And then everything would fade to blackness, no more fire, no more warmth, she was drowning in blackness, alone....


    alone.


    "Fadri..." a quiet, hoarse voice, sounding uncannily like her own choked out a single word, and instantly reality slammed the Orange-Fire full force. Where was she? She was laying in something soft, no doubt moss. Her nest? But the scent was all wrong, lacking the pungeant odor of ash and soot that had grown so familiar over the past few moons. Her muscles ached with a vengeance she didn't know quite possible, her neck felt as if it was on fire not her own. Fire. Why wasn't she in Fire-Tribe? She had so much work to do...


    Bleary, sleep-clouded eyes blinked slowly and let the world in, the shock of the sunshine streaming into the den leaving her temporarily sightless, and she let out a quiet moan as she blinked the iridescent spots away and the memories rushed back. There was a sandstorm. Then an Orange-Shadow. Fadri. And then, what felt like moments later...she was losing her grip in consciousness, the jaws of the Shadow-Triber gripping her neck, the fire to hurt, to kill flaring in her eyes...and then the fire. The release of the life-sucking grasp. A scream, then a quiet threat. Then blackness. Pure blackness, enveloping her, drowning her.


    How long she had been out, she didn't know. The memories still felt as raw and as fresh as her wound, which was covered in sticky, aromatic stuff she didn't care to identify, yet she had no recollection of ever having been brought to Light Tribe. Ugh. She sniffed the air gingerly, then let out a hoarse cough as the aroma of whatever spirit-forsaken treatment the healers had wrapped on her wound. Grudgingly, beneath many, many layers of irritation, she was grateful. She wasn't dead, which was always a relief. But frankly, at the moment, she was in too much pain to care. Too far away from home. The bitter scent of the poultice made her gag, and, never before had she felt so homesick in her life. Muttering something under her breath, she shifted position in the nest, when an electric shot of pain coursed through her body, leaving her gasping for breath and her neck numb.


    With a groan, the normally fervent Fire-Triber, so out of place in this medicinal environment, collapsed once more, her eyes clouded with pain and irritated resolution.


    "Right. I'll just...stay here then."
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Healing. It sucks. At the moment, to Charley, everything downright sucks.

545 words. Any points to :icontgb-firetribe:


This is open to responses! Direct or indirect.

Direct responses would prolly be Light-Tribers, or Fadri if he's still hanging around.

Indirect from Fire-Tribers noticing her absence or whatever. :dummy:
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[Blue-Light l Yukiteru l Light-Tribe Camp] 

The storm had thankfully settled a little and he was able to make his way back from Fisher's Outlook after being stuck in a hollowed out stone along with a Blue-Air. Though he survived he was still upset, his thoughts of coming back to injured cats were fated to become true. The Blue-Light had stuck close to his mentor and assisted in what he could do, which was mostly bringing out herbs and applying them to wounds. Dispite being a healer his powers weren't much when it came to helping those with larger and likely fatal wounds.

Three cats, three cats had died in this damned camp today and there was nothing he could do about it. A Blue-Air, an Orange-Shadow, and who knew how many more lives they lost with the Orange-Water who was expecting kits. Guilt weighed down his heart and he remembered looking at the former secondary Silver-Light with pity in his eyes as he looked down at the Blue-Air who was said to be his son. A sigh came from the Blue-Light as he thought of all the cats they lost. It was in all honesty depressing.

Looking up as he saw the Pink/Orange-Fire shift in her unconscious state, he moved forward. He had been watching her and was honestly worried due to the neck wound she received somehow. In a way he was almost ready for one of his tribe-mates to go in and announce she was dead. No though, she was thankfully a fighter. "I wouldn't move around too much if I were you, the wound barely closed so if you do it'll only open again." Meowed the apprentice as he made his way into the den. "And if it does I don't believe it'll be a cheerful experience." Added Yukiteru as he leaned against the wall of the den.